The heat of food radiates a delicious smell that drives me forward and after I eat, I feel a satisfying warmth. Some may say that feeling is an uncomfortable ache but to me, it is an appeasing feeling. After I eat something drenched in thick sauce, which tends to be pasta, I become drowsy and my eye lids feel like anvils. Most of the time I fall asleep after I eat a big meal but, it's alright because I feel full and alleviated. The combination of food and sleep always sounds good to me. The next immediate move I make after I arise from my momentary coma is look for a nice cold refreshing drink in the depths of my refrigerator. In the mountains of food in my fridge, I don't think about the amount of fat there is or how many carbs there are rather I just look for something I like and am familiar with like the shine of the sugar and oil glazed over a buttery pastry.
I've come to comprehend that food is sacred. Eating foods at different times of the day is a ritual. It is a ritual I enjoy because I find that I usually only eat things I have already tasted, an ambience of familiarity. I apprehend foods I have never tried nonetheless without food, my voids of hunger are longing to be filled. Food serves a purpose and a role that grant me the joys of several flavors, tranquil naps, and sometimes an uncomfortable bloated stomach. But that's the beauty of food, not everything is sweet but has a tang of bitterness.
Bianca C
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Bianca,
ReplyDeleteAppreciated the visuals you provided (buffet table, unspoken crucial ritual, sugar and oil glazed, mountains of food).
Also appreciated the effort you made to write beautifully with metaphor and sensual detail (food is a magic show, satisfying warmth).
Sometimes it didn't work out - first sentence doesn't make sense, a big word or two didn't fit (apprehend), it was sometimes too much "my voids of hunger are longing to be filled."
But I'd rather that you error on the side of expressivity than tedious mediocrity, since I have to read 95 of these things.